Assignment Notes

Following my tutor tutorial on my first draft of my essay, I have made some changes. I have gone through and addressed the issue my tutor has highlighted. I have taken out the waffly bits of writing and have taken pieces out that were not need. 

I have changed several things throughout my work. I have made minor changes to chapter one. I have re-worked chapter two. I have kept some aspects the same but have added new information. The majority of chapter three is the same to the first draft, but I have done some minor changes here too.  

I have written my abstract which has come in at under 500 words. I did some research into abstracts before writing mine, I wanted to make sure I was writing the correct things in it. I have placed my abstract after my title page. I am not sure whether this is the correct place or whether it needs to be on a completely separate document. 

My written project take the following format:

  • Title Page (Including title and word counts) 
  • Abstract
  • Contents Page
  • Introduction
  • Chapter One
  • Chapter Two
  • Chapter Three
  • Conclusion
  • References
  • Figures
  • Bibliography

I have included the images within the actual text as I felt it was easier to see the images next to the text that is exploring them. 

I believe this format is correct, and looks right. 

My work count has come in at 5384 without the quotes and referencing. It is 9181 in total including the referencing, quotes and bibliography. Without the bibliography it is 5929 words. The abstract is 465 words. 

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